W.A.L.T Use alliteration,
Today we had to do a 15 minute quick story inspired by this picture!
Here is my story! Hope you like it :)The fierce, frightening Zoo!
One day I was walking to the brilliant,big zoo with brave and courageous staff feeding the fierce, frightening animals, We had to stay a metre away from all animals at all times even the fast, friendly and foolish farm animals. As I was walking up to the Zoo not knowing what would be waiting for me on the other side, One man yells ´´There making a run for it!, another man yells ´Watch out´´ As their driving to me I scream at the top of my lungs ´´ Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!´ I quickly jump out of the way I see a van with animals inside and on the top! as they zoom of into the distance. ´Ím gonna get a glass of cold, cold water´I said Completely ignoring what I had just seen. The animals were never seen again and the Zoo got shut down. The End
Hi Lexi well done what an amazing story. My favourite alliteration was fast, friendly and foolish farm animals. It would have been quite a sight seeing all those animals driving out of the zoo. Good work.
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