W.A.L.T Use onomatopoeia!
Today for writing we had to write a story using onomatopoeia.
Here is the story I wrote, I hope you like it!
The scary sleepover...
One night I was having a sleepover with my friends. Everyone arrived on time. As it became closer to 9 we all decided to watch a movie. We put the popcorn in the microwave and it started going POP, POP, POP We took the popcorn out of the microwave and went to watch the movie as we are 1 hour into the movie we heard BANG, BANG, BANG we decided to keep watching the movie and ignore. The movie was almost finished but I noticed something strange. There was a shadow by the door, as I slowly approached the shadow. BANG, BANG, BANG. AHHHH! I screamed. All my friends went home. I went to bed..
The End.
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