Thursday 6 August 2020

Why all children should not have pets.

W.A.L.T To write a persuasive text 

All children should 

             Not have pets 


  I strongly believe that all children should not have pets. 

   I state three reasons why not all children should have pet reason one  They take up all of your attention reason  two They are expensive 

  Plus the stuff you need to buy for them reason three. Some dogs are very vicious and not suitable for families. 


Firstly,

 Say you were going out for dinner or going out with the whole family you would have to leave the dog home alone 

It has a lot of responsibility to have a pet and takes up 

Most of your time think before you buy. 

 


Secondly,

They are expensive and plus having to buy all the proper 

Equipment or care that a dog needs i believe it's bad for all 

Children to have pets


Thirdly,

They are vicious and sometimes not suitable for families even if you have a small child and a vicious dog that wouldn't go down 

Well. 


In conclusion,

I strongly believe not all children should NOT have pets this is

My persuasive writing of why all children should NOT have pets. Do you think all children should have pets?  




2 comments:

  1. Hi Lexi! I like you post about why childern sholud not have pets. maby next time you could try and focus on other pets and not just dogs.
    I do agree with you peatly I think that famillys with childern not sutable for a dog sholud not get one.

    Meg

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  2. Well done Lexi. You have created some very strong arguments and have paragraphed your work beautifully.

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