Wednesday 17 June 2020

crayon writing

W.A.L.T To write a persuasive letter we had to pretend that from the book the day the crayons quit that a crayon was writing to us this is my letter enjoy!

Lexi,
Yellow crayon here. I am very dissapointed in you! You’ve been using me too much! I am now very stubby and as short as a peanut...Fix This! Everyone is making fun of me even the nerdy crayon Orange! You have got to fix things between orange and tell him I am the real colour of the Sun!
Your very tired friend
 
Yellow crayon 



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  1. Anonymous24 June 2020 at 10:12

    Hi Lexi, it's Kate here from New Brighton Catholic School. I like the letter, it is very persuasive. I think I agree with the Yellow crayon although it isn't very nice to call Orange nerdy. Next time remember capital letters and grammar. Have you read the book "The day the crayons came home"?

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